I feel I've hit a plateau re:photos:
- (upper left) Pretty sky picture.
- (upper right) Probably my favorite of the bunch but not particularly inspiring. Would like to retroactively reframe, slightly to the left, and refocus on the bush in the foreground.
- (lower left) I like this photo for its vaguely pin-hole-esque feel and the cryptic reflections in the foreground, but its a bit washed out and feels a bit staged. I like stagey, but it needs to be either more or less so. Also, I'm guessing M would say the figure is too centered.
- (lower right) There's a texture and luminosity here I wanted to capture - a silver gelatin kind of thing - but it was taken, hand-held at night, and the lack of focus is a stumbling block.
Indicative of something greater?
*I've now rotated the order per M's suggestions.
**Still feels like the same photos in a new arrangement, though
If #4 was in first position, #1 in second, #2 in third, and #3 in fourth the eye flow would totally change. Maybe reframing is the key.
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